CHILDS MADNESS

a child with a gun

it's big news these days

makes me wonder

if they can see beyond the haze

why do they do it?

we may never really know

anger, music or abuse

the signs can seem to glow

they are like a ticking bomb

waiting for just some excuse

there are those that say

it's the music, drugs and booze

but I tend to think

it is much simpler than that

for with out some sort of discipline

you might be raising another brat

spare the rod and spoil the child

that is what I have always heard

I watch the news and think it's true

children killing children how absurd

I don't know what the answer is

but I know we need to find it and soon

it seems like time might be running out

for they no longer need a full moon

Author's Notes/Comments: 

14 and 15 year olds killing or shooting people.... what is this world coming to.... it scares the hell out of me...

when will it stop?????????????

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee This is such a sad poem! Even sadder is the fact that it is happening more and more each day! A powerful read and thanks for sharing Roz :)

gentle's picture

Excellent job!! You have brought attention to a problem that definitely must be solved. It is such a sad, but, so true fact of life, isn't it. Amy


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gentle's picture

Excellent job!! You have brought attention to a problem that definitely must be solved. It is such a sad, but, so true fact of life, isn't it. Amy


Gentle is the night♥

Kristine Snow's picture

Renee, It seems like they don't recognize reality and fantasy...oh, she said she didn't like my hair so I will shoot her - oops - I didn't know it was forever! There certainly is a real problem with this...reality/fantasy, right/wrong, they haven't got it. And we aren't allowed to discipline our children anymore...if people think you spank them, YOU are in trouble. Enough already! I don't know where it will stop or how to stop it but you are right - it must stop! Kris

Melvin Lee's picture

U should read my STILL WATERS and ILLEGIBLE they deal with this problem.... Yes, it is very sad...