FLASH

I can see you there behind me......



bet you did not know that......



you are like a quick flash.....



only a blur through time.......



I catch a shot only now and then.......



you never want to me to see straight on......



so I depend on the side shot.....



if I move you run like a scared fawn......



but your presence I can feel......



why don't you stay a while.....



see what you think of the world now.....



use my eyes to see........



my mouth to speak......



my hands to touch......



welcome to my world......



hope you enjoy your stay....



all that I ask.....



don't shy away.......

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Carla Mobley's picture

I like the title and the photographic images.

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee This was a beautiful read.. loved it! Roz :)

Tim Marshall's picture

ALRIGHT that is a little gem like playing hocky listening to helter shelter lol GREAT L&P

ladydp2000's picture

Bravo my friend Renee,this poem is so beautiful, I think now is gonna be my very favorite maybe of all your poems I had read so far of yours...i had to read it like 3 times and I dont really know why..kid..it just that for some reason or other it had touched so much emotionally....to me this one is a true gem of a poem piece...congratulations! and thank you for sharing it with me right away...I loved it..continue writing and posting more and more my dear friend.. you are a very talented poet to me.And very sorry to hear about your mom...hope you are doing much better now...at least I pray you do...as Christmas gets near you do one way or another... Have a wonderful day for now and take care of yourself. Lots of love always, Sincerely,your friend that really cares. Dorian.