DEATH OF THE CRAFT

ROAMING AS I LIKE TO DO,

CHECKING OUT ALL THATS NEW.

NO CRITIQUES CAUGHT MY EYE,

AFTER AN HOUR THERE I JUST HAD TO SIGH.



SO MANY POEMS TO READ,

OH MY, WILL WE SUCCEED.

HOLD ON TO YOUR HAT,

NOW ENTERING LOST POEMS HABITAT.



I NEED SOME HELP HERE,

COME ON HAVE NO FEAR.

THERE ARE MORE THAN A FEW,

SO COME HELP ME WANT YOU?



IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO VOLUNTEER,

EMAIL RACHELLE, WANT YOU BE A DEAR.

OFFER YOUR HELP IN ANYWAY,

PLEASE DO THIS FOR ME, WHATA SAY?


Author's Notes/Comments: 

if you wish to help with this ..... you may feel free to email me...... thank you for your help....

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Tim Marshall's picture

GREAT TRY,NICE FRIENDLY ONE A+ YOU'RE A SWEET WOMAN

Valhjim's picture

'Tis hard, indeed, to read so much and write critiques for such and such; so many writers, so many lines, what to say 'bout all those rhymes? most times we love the sound, the beat the images and impassion'd heat, we long to encourage so we all can grow, get good enough to let our poems flow, sure, with wondrous souls like you, we cannot help it but keep trying too, and read as many poems as we find time to, and with kind words help everyone to brew great lines, great poetry just like you! Thanks for caring, Rennee!

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee Well that is the way for sure to get your message across... pretty cool, hey? Loved it!!!!!!! Would love to help if I can! Cya Roz