UNLEASH THE LOVE

A brand new world has just been found.

It's the best of ANY that's around.

A world where there is NO disease.

A world with NO wars overseas.



Absolutely NO abuse of ANY kind.

Not physical, sexual or against the mind.

No unemployment or folks living on the street.

Everyone has a smile for the person they meet.



In this world there is NO type of crime.

You never grow old, you stay in your prime.

We worship and have faith in the man above.

But to live here you must UNLEASH THE LOVE.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

thanks TIM.... this is the latest in our little contest... hope you like it....

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poetvg's picture

i 'll just
say this
poem is
just worth it .

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee Great message behind this poem... Can I come there with you to live???? Cya Roz

Miranda Rae's picture

Renee, Great poem with a great message. Best of all it's written in that uniquely Renee way I love so much. :)

Farah D's picture

may I add one more to your brand new world..."a brand new world where Renee' continues to enchant everyone with her wonderful writing.." Much enjoyed!

Tanya Foltz's picture

This is what every sane person in the world wants! Me included......(as we all know I do not fit into the sane part of it) LOL........Keep up the good work! As always....you are wonderful!

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Yes! I have a vision...it is this! Love you and your wonderful thoughts, Renee' You had better be smiling again :) This is a GREAT frieking title, Tim... I threw the frieking part in just especially for you, cause I know how much you like that sort of thing :) LOL Renee' It is SO GOOD to have you back full-force! Write that stuff out!

Tim Marshall's picture

RENEE'THANK YOU YOU ALWAYS UNLEASH LOVE AND IT SPREAD'S JOY TO US ALL

Edwin Robinette's picture

I like this one, it delivers a great message! Thanks for the good read!

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Hey, I am especially interested in that staying in your prime thing....:) so cool of a poem!~ Just very neat. It's nice to dream!

Deborah E Russell's picture

Renee' if everyone unleashed love as you...this world would be a better place