Crooked Screw

As I walked along I saw a crooked screw.

All I could think of was "What did they do to you"?

Did they try to put you into a wall of resistance?

Don't they know that not all screws can go the distance?

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vjochum's picture

again renee you never stop to amaze me with the way you write poetry. I just hope that one day I'll be as good as a poet as you.

vjochum's picture

Ahhh yes Renee. Definitely I see the same message here! Ya know, this made me cry when I read "What did they do to you?" Shows you have great empathy towards others which have endured something dreadful. This was very good! Thank you for pointing it out to me. ~~Hugs~~

Robert  LaFountain's picture

cute. VERY cute!! Brought a big smile to my face. You are quite a woman. I'm amazed at how you can take something as simple as a crooked screw and personify it to give it such life. Keep up this kind of writing. Really enjoyed it!!!! Goldeneagle

owlcrkbrg's picture

Real nice poem.Thx

"There is no good writing, only good editing."

Deborah Russell's picture

Great thinking tool. Thanks.

Roz's picture

Hi Renee Hmmm, this could bring on a lot of different meanings! Good work! Cya and have a great day Roz :)

Tanya c's picture

Renee i love this...has such deep meaning behind the words, makes me think of a person i know... thankyou for that Tanya