ANITA

Anita is as sweet a person you'd ever want to know.

In her eyes and smile her kindness it does show.

I hate to see her having such a hard time.

Trying to live life seems her only crime.



One day soon I hope that she'll be happy as can be.

From her pain and heartache she will be set free.

She'd do anything like give you the shirt off her back.

It's the people that hurt her feelings that I want to smack.



I hope that this makes her feel some what better.

And for her days to become what we call RED-LETTER.

Because I tell you she has a great soul and heart.

I could see this in her right from the very start.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is about a lady that I know.... hope you have a great day ANITA

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee You have such a kind soul. You are always there for everyone else and the way you express your feelings for those you care about in your poetry is divine! Another nice read.... You deserve to be the "Tribute of all tributes" .. Have a nice day :) Roz

Elhaym Van Houten's picture

I've come to know an Anita or two, and this poem is a voice for not only her, but for others who's ether is in pains to become matter. Great poem.=)

Elhaym Van Houten's picture

I've come to know an Anita or two, and this poem is a voice for not only her, but for others who's ether is in pains to become matter. Great poem.=)

Elhaym Van Houten's picture

I've come to know an Anita or two, and this poem is a voice for not only her, but for others who's ether is in pains to become matter. Great poem.=)

Tim Marshall's picture

great poem hard to pass by

Didi Menendez's picture

This poem must have made Anita very happy. I would have been very proud to have a friend try to cheer me up this way. Good work. Didi

Tim Marshall's picture

IN THE TOP TEN A+

Robertpaullocke's picture

good poem. Anita has a great friend. Oh I have three more new poems..... I hope you like

Michelle Noel's picture

Renee, You have probably made Anita's day by writing such a nice poem for her. You have to be the best friend there is!!! Another Sterling Job!!!!

Tim Marshall's picture

VERY SWEET PERSON TO BRING OUT SUCH A POEM AND A VERY GOOD JOB

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

That is exactly what I've been talking about, Renee' .... Your heart. So big, So big. This made me want Anita to have a great day, too :) Anita.. chin up, girl! Keep the faith.