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Sorry Lives
Tsk Tsk
Stupid people thinking that
life is great and perfect.
if it is, you're doing
somehting wrong. What
is life if it is perfect?
Something not worth living.
People commit suicide
becasue life sucks and has flaws.
I think I'd do it
if it were flawless.
I think it's great work, I like it..I agree with it's missing a little something..Something between "Something Not Worth Living, and People COmit Suicide"..I love this though, It really made me feel what you feel...Awesome writing--Jen
I like the final thought in the poem, that even suicide isn't perfect. I can completely understand the idea behind life not being a bowl of chcocolate...But...I don't know...The poem seems like it's missing something. I hate when this happens, because it's not a bad poem, it's just lacking something. What that something is I don't really know. But either way, it's really good work! :)