ALL THIS AND MORE
I would climb a 100 mountains
that lead to a 1000 walls,
I would climb them one by one,
I would scale them all,
I would walk through broken glass
on bended knees.
just to hear you say that you loved me.
I would swim every shark infested sea,
I would walk on hot coals until my feet
would bleed,
I would walk alone on the darkest city
street
just to see that smile you smile so sweet
I would endure all this and more to have you near
not being with you is my greatest fear
"If you only knew how very much I care"
JOYCE JAMES
Wow, this poem definitly
simplifies love and how
most people feel when
they are in love. It's
so wonderful & true
and I can totally
relate to it! That's
a quality of a good poet
is-Getting other people
to relate and be able to
understand! Keep it up! I
love reading your poetry
because you have pure talent!
.h.u.g..n..k.i.s.s.e.s.
~*eRiCa*~
This poem in it's sentiment is universal.
I appreciate it's ardor and sincerity.
All poems should as this and more.
Keep the faith - Keep the dreams alive.