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You Made
You made my heart beat running away
Beating like a drum
When your turning away
Had me worried
THROUGH sadness
And I HAD to live with it
By: Hanna Robins
(If you want to say something bad or rude about this poem, don't say it.) This poem is kinda short but I hope you like it!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_SNL5tYLtg
That is Nikki Minaj- Super Bass instrumental. You can sing the poem with it.
I like this a lot
This is cute. And don't worry if someone would put a bad comment or not like it. This is YOUR poem. YOU wrote it the way u wanted to. And there will always be someone who loves a poem u wrote, and there will always be someone who doesnt like it. The important thing is tht YOU like it. Its ur creativity. Its ur right as a poet. Besides, sometimes, ppl will post constructive criticism. Meaning they want to help improve your writing. Doesnt mean u hav to even listen tho. And if someone just criticizes without any intention of helping, then they obviously arent a true poet. True poets respect others work. C:
-Bryson T. Staley
if no bad comments are
if no bad comments are accepted then why live in a lie ?
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
If you cannot accept having
If you cannot accept having someone saying YOUR poem is bad , maybe putting them out their is a bad IDEA for you ... Just saying .
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
By the way, check your
By the way, check your grammer. It's THERE not THEIR.
-Bryson T. Staley
Obviously, shes most likely a
Obviously, shes most likely a beginner poet, or isnt used to sharing her poems. She's prob worried that ppl wont like her poems because she doesnt share that often and doesnt know what ppl will think. She doesnt want bad comments because she doesnt want to be criticized or put down for her creativity. Why dont u cut her a break? And think before u speak. The only bad IDEA was ur comment. Just saying.
-Bryson T. Staley
ugh............
what r u talking about? _CRAY-ZAY_
i like the way wrote the
i like the way wrote the poem. all the best.
Dr. Zayed Bin Zakir Shawon
Very short and I think it
Very short and I think it does go along with the song. And it's cute
-Elfy*