Once forever

Don’t say those words

They’ll just break my heart

Cuz once it’s all ended

That’s where it starts

Forever, is a word

We’ve sung about too much

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I’ll love you forever

Then leave you for someone new

Its an familiar old rhyme

We all know is true

So don’t even say it

If you feel it inside

For once forever is spoken

Our love is sure to die


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Pinaki Ranjan Mukherjee's picture

though i don't understand your intent in this poem fully...but some phrases are really good...like,

"I’ll love you forever
Then leave you for someone new"

---- i have to understand this culture yet...

Megan Bailey's picture

Hello lost friend. haha This is a very nice poem. I read it and I actually understood what you meant. It has great meaning and it hit me very hard. Keep up the GREAT work.

Megan