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Confusing thoughts setting here wondering
wondering whats on my mind
deciding if i'm wasting
wasting all my time
do i love him?
is this that strong
a confusing love
with emotions that may be wrong
controlling
pressured feelings uncontrolled
smothering
pull away with a stronger hold
imagining
imagine how it will be
trying
try to see it as a fantasy
wanting
but do i want this?
thinking
thoughts of things i've missed
forgetting
i forgot what was on my mind
remembering
remembering it's a waste of time
Hey... Your poem is amazing. In all honesty this poem is probably one of the best poems that I can relate too. Great job
r we wasting time?
i suppose in some ways it was a waste of time at that time, but at least you learned how you felt in the end, and that life sometimes serves you liver when you want steak
This is very powerful and deep. You play with words leaving and beginning with the same word for emphasis and effort. It works very well. I can see myself as you in that I've often wandered if having fantasies, dreams, and stuff that doesn't seem feasible are a waste of my time. I've wandered many things and still often do. I go back and forth with my wandering like your poem does with certain words. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of it by you.