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I stare with amazement   trying to look away,

mesmerized,    full of life

i've become deeply portrayed

take another moment   worth a thousand words

priceless to anyone that experiences the chance

of a memory now blurred

simple as the truth  not based on another lie

my vision is lost inside you

   deeply i'm mesmerized

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 5:43pm
©2 January 2002 - 8:17am — gwennalockafer
20 November 2003 - 6:03am — poetvg
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tight piece

19 February 2003 - 4:17am — Robin (not verified)
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I like=)

4 November 2002 - 9:59am — poetvg
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wonderful work on this one :*).

25 July 2002 - 10:21am — Matt Handlos (not verified)
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i love how you make it feel like im inside your head and i can see everything through your eyes. your poetry puts me in different shoes and makes me see things through a different light. i like that, i like it a lot. ok thanks =)