Morbid inside
Numb insides
they croaked and died
life was the lie
Scared of seeing
no one is there
scared of rejection
they don't care
Is this hatred
or is this peace?
words not said
scared to see
Sinking distance
I'm beyond
to me it's true
to you it's wrong
Teenage whores
fuck them all
all plus more
death I saw
Creeping on
The freak returned
numb inside
in hell you'll burn
You should write a song... NO REALLY!
Not sure on this one jenny............
Great work. Very absorbing and attention keeping. :-)
i liked it i thought it had alot of emotion
Anger I see Rage I see Disappointment and disillusionment often lead to suicide or homicide, best not to dwell too long on these I have found. Although I understand where it all comes from. Another great poem by the way.