Your "author's notes" section also contains the seeds of two poems, which, in my opinion, you should try to expand: Libra mooning us, and the moon as voyeur.
I actually borrowed that phrase from a poem about Cunningham, written by X J Kennedy, who was often thought of as the second Cunningham. Kennedy had written about how Cunningham compressed his poems so tightly that each one was like a neutron star. The comparisonapplies equally to you.
Your "author's notes" section
Your "author's notes" section also contains the seeds of two poems, which, in my opinion, you should try to expand: Libra mooning us, and the moon as voyeur.
Starward
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Hi Make sure you get your fair share of the royalties. Haha
Ha!
I think you are Wright. Oops. Spellchecker did that. Must be a sign... I shall save them as titles so I don't forget.
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Wow! Your compression, like
Wow! Your compression, like Cunningham's, makes this poem as powerful as a neutron star.
Starward
Thats awesome
"powerful as a neutron star"
This is a great line. Honored to hear them in reference to my work. That's cool.
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I actually borrowed that
I actually borrowed that phrase from a poem about Cunningham, written by X J Kennedy, who was often thought of as the second Cunningham. Kennedy had written about how Cunningham compressed his poems so tightly that each one was like a neutron star. The comparisonapplies equally to you.
Starward
Pretty neat
Feels good to hear these words. Thank you.
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Just as it is always great to
Just as it is always great to read your words---your poems are refreshing.
Starward