The ignorants of the sun and the moon

I was ignorant to this world when I was first born, then I started to gain knowledge then I look within It was wisdom then I got my pen that’s when the understanding came in ,it seems like we are going to die from a chemical imbalance and gin, the sin permeates the ones who bath in it those who bath there get out that mess bath in rightness and stream to the heaves until the sec your lungs are about to burst then a clam presents will come over where it use to hurt I am not talking about the feeling that happens after you burp ,just look in to the moon what is embraced by space stays still never moves out of place the sun will come and take its place, then one day the sky will totally change face night and day will become one when the moon blocks the sun I who is perfect balance stand between them as stars, when I write these bars to see the natural beauty that shines like a ruby from a far the sky at a distance seems more close to hurt it or even stab, it’s like trying to throw rock from Manhattan to far rockaway does it seem like when you get there when you step on land it diapers and you are back where you started ,oops my sanity departed
where there is uncharted waters the moon is on the heaves borders waves start to move with the rhythm , as they get bigger and bigger it going to leave people disfigure then the question lingers, is the moon life giver or the life taker, then the great backer raise with the horizon shining on the thing that need to grow is the sun the life giver or the life taker, then the moon stares at the destruction it just made the water socks in the ground so life can began again, is the moon the life giver or the life taker the sun get jealous because it did not get to make pain in the hearts of men the sun rays glistening fire destroys the crops is the sun the life giver or the life taker.

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I am so happy i found this website i hope you guy like tell me what y'all think one love

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Griot's picture

Thanks for reading and the comments

i enjoyed reading you guys poems as well i have a story in the works i will put it up soon one love

secret's picture

I like it

I like it you should write more


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SSmoothie's picture

not bad at all,

Needs a little polish and structure but interesting ideas and unique style! Keep writing cheers SS


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Bazin3's picture

Wow

This is so meaningful. The way you write is very different and you should post some more.


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Griot's picture

Grateful

Thanks it meant alot for you to read it