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Used to be in paradise
When I saw her, I was sure she was an elf,
she was the most beautiful girl I've ever seen.
I never really could say no to myself,
back then I was the happiest I've ever been.
It was so good, I thought it was a dream,
I always thought she would tell me no.
I knew that she would go to him,
so all I said to her was...go.
1 it is deep and i feel bad
1 it is deep and i feel bad if this is true
2 being your first poem, not a haiku, its great and show potnetial
3 don't limit your poetic gift on only haikus
yeah, it's true :/ thank you
yeah, it's true :/
thank you very much, i'll try to write more poems