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Haikus Noise in the forrest...
the elves hide in a moment,
the song disappears.
Noise in the forrest...
the elves hide in a moment,
the song disappears.
Lose the first part, "I know
Lose the first part, "I know I'm not good", and keep the second part, "I'm doing my best". That's all any of us do. Sometimes it turns out that others like what you write. Sometimes, only you LOVE what you write, but keep writing. That's how you develop and you never know just what talent you may tap into if you don't delve into it. You already understand the form and function of a haiku and have a successful and lovely one here. Keep it up!
oh thank you, you're really
oh thank you, you're really nice! :)
i got the idea for this haiku in tolkien's The Hobbit :)