Empty Nest

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Once a place, where laughter rings;

Between playmates who dance and sing;

Their voices sweet; they’re full of life;

Cute angels sent from heaven above.



Once a court, where princesses reign;

Uncrowned, bejewelled with dimpled chins;

When dreamtime bids, they’re sweet cherubs in the crib.

They’re my joy, my source of motherly pride.



Once a playground, where fantasy plays;

They catch rainbows in their mines of dreams.

Books and friends; toys and games;

They tell stories and acting out names.



Once a clinic, where nurses serve;

Looking after patients, they pretend to share,

Lots of tender loving care they give,

Hugs and kisses on duty cheers.



Once a school, where children learn;

To read, write, count, and listen.

They teach each other with fun and joy,

Learning is experience that they enjoy.



Once a garden, where insects swarm;

Pretty flowers they adore and charm,

The nature lays green carpet on the ground,

Shrubs and trees fence us all around.



Once a church, where worship held;

Songs of praise they gaily sing.

Kindred spirit nurtured well,

They grow in light and grace.





This home is now an empty nest.

No more shadows lurking in the sun.

Void of nuisance, and spirit of fun

Of loved ones once, I shared for many years.



Copyright@greenmeadow 2007

30 October 2007 QH NSW Australia












Author's Notes/Comments: 

~My girls are highly independent-minded and cannot wait to be on their own wings. My youngest just left home to adventure living without me which she is so dependent of. Situation changes, and she feels it is high time for her to spread her own independency just like what her elder sister did. What is important, she has a vision and her goal is to succeed. Since she is doing well academically, I wish her all the best, so is my eldest. They belong to a culture that deeply contrasts mine, but being sensible and good-spirited girls, I know and I am confident with trust given to them, they will go a long way to proving to themselves and to their father who abandon them since childhood, that they can do better in life with the help from the Divine Providence. Of course, this breaks my heart, but I have to let go and let God.~

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I think that even when a child grows independent, sometimes though not to impede with his or her independence, a parent would like to feel wanted and/or needed. Excellent read. My own sister is about to leave the nest soon so I understand how my mom feels just like you.

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Empty Nest

Very sorry Bryan Adam Tomimbang... You left me a comment 5 years ago! And today is my first come back! Hope you are still around continuing on with your own poetry I used to enjoy reading!


"Did not our heart burn within us?" ~Luke 24:32