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I seem to lose touch

In this world of disarray

The vision of tomorrow

Has been dimmed by time.



I question destiny

What is future for me

He told me, "follow me,

I will take you with me.



Pitfalls are on the way;

Temptations tarry you.

They all lead you astray

Be careful as you go".



Destiny has left me;

Adventure takes his place.

Commonsense pricks my guilt.

I see reality.



@3/8/2006

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reality versus falsity. We often lost touch with the real world.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 5:37pm
©5 July 2006 - 1:53am — greenmeadow
12 September 2007 - 4:59pm — John Foster (not verified)
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Yes, this is a well composed piece..It is all about commensenseat the end. 'Destiny has left and adventure takes his place'.. Eloquent words indeed.