"A word to the wise:
Cry grains of sand
And you'll be buried alive."
You say your vision spun the logic threads
to stitch your heart immune to what the others bled.
But tilling here the open fields of dread
I wonder,
Whose skin doesn't burn under the sun?
There's a hole in the fabric of our souls:
Half plastic, half elastic, it holds
the potential to grow
depending which side we embrace.
And like a parallel dimension
We hang in suspension
awaiting the actions of the other
to write futures untold.
While space guitars
Harmonize nebulas with stars
And I'm drumming on the rings of Saturn
from home with my eyes closed.
And you shake me in my chair
in frightening patterns.
Labeling me a misguided dream
While I cry ethereal tears of crystal gleams
that never shatter...
Yes, my words escape as tattered
But, my battered breath is fatter
as it splatters on the canvas:
And I urge you to speak in a million colors
Even if the smothered blends
Cannot be discernibly measured.
So if it makes your body shudder
Grab hold of the nearest wall
And let the vibrations
Release through it all...
Again I say,
These thoughts are parenthetical(s) devised
to keep an open end
to all the hypotheticals alive...
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