back up
against canvas of the wall.
her sweat paints
rubbing passion
as my tongue crawls
upward
to unfasten
her breath, trapped.
i remember...
she stood over me
with open palms
to the wall behind her
in blistered aching...
i was to
find my way inside her
and dart between the fleshly opening
to water cave...
soon i'd find her
eyes closed
with whispering lips of vinyl -
her body spun
liquid tunes
across my needle tip.
squirming curves
bent around
chalkboard sounds.
her fingernails
raking off
house paint
as colors
harvested in her gut
escaped
through vibrant mound.
she could see
why, starved for a meal
i'd fallen to my knees..
yet she was the one at
the quivering mercy
of my empty plate...
pouring sauce
unto porcelain tongue...
Most stuff on this site sucks.
Yours isn't bad. I'll go so far to say it's good.