And then I stroll
Throughout the inner city of my body
Holding all that's cold.
All that's poor and weak, disgruntled
Thrown across the floor.
Every broken basket rim
And every murder scene.
Do you think that I could be at all
Any better off outside these slums?
In say, a little four square blocks just off a mile
Sunk with tennis courts and men with endless funds.
My! How even the bums are rich!
How every corner bitch reeks
With fine champagne and glitz and... oh... that sweetest scent
Of such perfumes that showcase every dollar spent.
Ah, Jesus... Which part to embrace.
The ghetto in my face
Or the cheap escape of vanity.
The boardwalk and the park place.
Which one retains my sanity for longer?
Which one makes me stronger?
Which one pleads a better case?
Ahh how I once retreated into every corner of my precious rich town.
My little bitch town.
Complete with crowns and mystic magic all around
And things that make me see my life for more than it can be
Through some distorted memory.
But still I come to every alley in my slum.
Embrace the plain and relish right its pain.
Magistics lacking
Leave me no more backing to confide in.
Just a barren, fact-of-matter site
That can at times grow trite
To such a longing brain.
But still, I must appreciate
The simple truth it spouts
From every sewer mouth.
How it brings me down
Onto your earthly ground
And paints my life for no more than it seems to be
And no less than it means to me.
Just essence clean. My dirty fears... My purest means.
And all the things that form within my dreams.
My dearest ghetto.
You are THAT part of my mind which isn't rebel to the facts.
You are THAT part so unchanging,
That redundant meadow
Painted with the things I'm worth
And not the lies I've fabricated since my birth
The words that spawn a laminated earth
That I cannot set foot on.
So I'll cling to you always, and put on
Every outfit that looks good on... you.
The broken bottles on the soaking asphalt.
Dripping with the rain from every time I shed my weak disguise.
Exhausted from the lies...
Exhausted from the eyes that filter everything I live for.
Tiring disguise... When all is said and done, what do you claim?
What do I sin for?
Precious slums.
How I come back after betrayal
And make a home in you.
How you craft a portrayal
Of my inner zone so true...
ow this is awesome i really love it they way you made the 5th stanza longer than the rest makes it all that much better
babe
Well done. Kept my interest right up to the end. Composed well. Very good use of the metaphore. The fifth stanza is long, but I hoestly don't know if breaking it up into more stanzas would improve it.
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Good poem