Timely tradition
of courtship,
would have me believe
she seeks eloquence,
and careful intermittence
of falling leaves.
Yet I smother her
with I love you's
and thinking of you's
and nothing's ever above you
my angel...
Almost a stranger to touch you.
Because you're that deep ingrained
in God's spoken refrain.
Let me clutch you
close to something I call a heart.
A dormant volcano, so to speak.
So to seek ignition,
was met with recognition
by the fire starter...
leaving me to use
something...
anything...
at my disposal
to throw together this proposal at verse,
which is probably half-eaten
and poorly constructed.
Throwing tongue to the wayside
and drowning in puddles of babble.
Bubbles of muddle
popped
into scribble
scrabbled all over a page.
The rattle of love-stricken lips
in a battle to spit what they feel.
A sum of all fears
unsaddled by one...
Thank you
for making me mumble and drool.
For making me stumble
the path of a fool,
who will gladly scramble away from his language
just for a humble embrace.
No... a "hug."
Wow, that's brilliant, i love the use of language and the general shape of the poem.