Darkness to Bliss

Darkness To Bliss

Years spent in the void
With no end in sight


But you ventured in
And brought in the light


You dragged out a corpse
That was holding a knife


You cleaned all its wounds
And brought it to life


You taught it to feel
But it could only cry


You dried all its tears
And then it could fly


Its wings were spread wide
It was peaceful like a dove


It gazed into your eyes
And it fell in love


It knew not what it had
And was surprised by this

 


I never thought you'd bring me
From darkness to bliss

Author's Notes/Comments: 

First poem I wrote and just looking to share. Give feedback please!

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Forever Love

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The truth is she brought you from darkness

to bliss. Done with a miraculous and lingered

first kiss. This is the meaning of feathers

in flight. Dove wings always transform

darkness to bright.

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~Lady A~

12-10-13

3:30p

 

 

A wonderful write this - enjoyed your poem enormously ~allets

 

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