On Far Off Lands.....

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On Far Off Lands.....

 

They'll always...... be.

A little part, of me.

That's been,.... left behind.

Whether, added ....to the water.

Or buried, in the mud.

Perhaps..... reverent, in the wind.

Or ....

a small piece, encapsulated...

Within,.... 

My brain.

Which will forever rest.

As long,.... as I remain.

A memory......... of a,

Time,.... when, 

 

I once was, a man!

Giajl © Jim Love 

 

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truthintragedies's picture

enjoyed this

The sting of losing, longing, remembering. Parts of ourselves gone...never knowing what it's like to be whole again. I really liked this. I like the pauses...really adds to the emotional toll of it all.


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My piece

Thank you for taking the time to stop by. I'm glad you liked it


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