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I just want to cry
Curl up
And die
Once it feels
Like my life
Is over.
I'm going
Back......to
Bed.
Giajl © Jim Love
I'm Hiding In
I just want to cry
Curl up
And die
Once it feels
Like my life
Is over.
I'm going
Back......to
Bed.
Giajl © Jim Love
Nice poem. ;-)
Nice poem. ;-)
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Clever words, thanks for
Clever words, thanks for stopping by
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!
Nice poem
Thank you for the kind words
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!
Sounds very definately
Sounds very definately like depression. Hope the person got professional help. Your poem is brief but gets to the point on depressive behaviour. An interesting read.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Sounds very definitely
Interesting diagnosis doc,
are you qualified?
Just asking ,
as everybody I've seen
says I'm normal!!! Lol
but if that were the case ,
why would I be asking,
in the first place?
and why is everything
a ryhme ?
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!
Rhyming incessantly is a
Rhyming incessantly is a symptom of some mental illnesses, but if you want to get technical about it, doing anything incessantly is a symptom. So in that case, everyone has some sort of symptom. Symptoms aren't the problem. The problem is when the symptom interferes with a persons ability to be useful in society. There are plenty of highly intelligent productive (and some even infamous) individuals with symptoms who do not overuse their symptoms and learned alternative ways to cope, whereby actually becoming productive 'through' what used to be perceived as a symptom.
Mental health is a choice, but no one knows that. People either want a magic pill, or they want some sort of recognition paid in monetary value. Just my opinion but I've seen a lot and that is what I was enlightened to....learning the medical system is more of an 'industry' than a healing profession. People are on their own...really. I woukd hope to see it change in my lifetime, bit as long as people depend on symptoms to diagnose (label), and drugs that only treat symptoms, it will continue worldwide...like the neglected cancer it is.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Rhyming
Hmmmmm
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!
Haha!!! aw...go
Haha!!! aw...go ahead...diagnose yourself. You know you want to!! (Kidding). Your poems are really good. I hardly ever see you post and then all of a sudden you post a ton.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "