Wasting Your Breath

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To me, being called quiet
Is about the worst
critical remark I’ve ever heard.

I hate it because it’s
An asinine phrase,
Utterly pointless.

How can you respond to it?

What’s the use
Of noting that observation?

Don’t say anything
About anyone
That does not benefit them
Or shows them how to improve.

Because you would just be
Wasting your breath.  

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Don’t say anything
About anyone
That does not benefit them
Or shows them how to improve.

Because you would just be
Wasting your breath.

as you expressed in the above stanzas..I agree with them and this is true and heart feeling... like the way of reality you promote in poetic way..means you are perfect poetess and you have much talent to open your heart for the knocking of ego... well done.. love it and agreed..sure I am...