I know they have left you jaded
Your hopes have since faded
But I will love you more
Than the girls from before
No longer will you be callous
Nor your heart filled with malice
Someday some girl
Will make you the center
Of her world
Someday somewhere
You will find someone
For whom to share
A love beyond compare
Someday...you will be loved
And that day is today
It is a nice work but you have to read the second paragraph
again, i think something is missing.Success!
its lovely... and shows your love's depth... for some one... very great and interesting poem