Take Me Away

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Take me to a place
Where I hear only
The waves breaking
Along the shorelines
And seagulls singing

Take me to a place
Where strangers
Are friendlier than
People you’ve
Know your whole life

Take me to a place
Where crickets
Are the only echo
Between mountains
And within forests

Take me away
Anywhere
As long as it's
Away from here

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Afzal Shauq's picture

Take me to a place
Where crickets
Are the only echo
Between mountains
And within forests

what a great emtional and romantic stanza... love it... really enojying your poems

Ben Keay's picture

Love this one!

I'd just like to say that I think you write really well, completely honest and open and I find your work inspirational.

I also admire that you're so prolific! Keep writing them and i'm sure I won't be the only one who keeps reading them.