We complemented
each other so well-
You had a fondness
for stroking
my velvet smoothness,
a fixation
from the very first touch.
I had a tendency
to wrap myself around
the belief that you
could remain
attached to me.
But our union was
prefabricated to
endure only light
resistance,
worn out in time
from overdependence.
Our ties were
wrought with pretension
where I relied
too heavily on hope
until trust frayed.
Man, you fractured
our bond-
my confidence in
love became torn-
when you
ripped us apart.
I should’ve seen it coming:
after all, you used
temporary adhesive.
Rewrite 2012
We complemented
each other so well-
You had a fondness
for stroking
my velvet smoothness,
a fixation
from the very first touch.
I had a tendency
to wrap myself around
the belief that you
could remain
attached to me.
But our union was
prefabricated to
endure only light
resistance,
worn out in time
from overdependence.
Our ties were
wrought with pretension
where I relied
too heavily on hope
until trust frayed.
Man, you fractured
our bond-
my confidence in
love became torn-
when you
ripped us apart.
I should’ve seen it coming:
after all, you used
temporary adhesive.
:-) I really like this and the whole idea behind it. Well structured and painfully good concept.
Well done