Truth Revealed

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Lessons Learned

I don’t want to believe

What we had was all a lie

But sometimes I’m not sure.

Today at least it appears to me

That I may have liked you-



Because the representation

Of me reflected in your eyes

Was much more pleasing than

The one that I stared into

Mirrors every morning,



And because the gleam

In your teeth that found

A purity in me of which

I hadn’t seen before as I was

Used to looking at grimy hands.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

my god ..my god..look at this stanza of your's ...so meangingful and richly done...

Because the representation
Of me reflected in your eyes
Was much more pleasing than
The one that I stared into
Mirrors every morning,

hope you also go through those poems of mine which are not critiqued yet and litle bit in detail to enjoy your comments too