Saturated emotion~
a mirage amid
arid thoughts.
Poetry develops
when wet meets dry.
Sweat and cry
onto the page;
let all your rage out
with fluid motion.
Inspiration rains
fall on desert plains,
envelop the land~
drenching the sand.
Creation by hands,
reflection unplanned:
a barrage of muse.
Soak those blues away;
ooze to keep them at bay.
Gauge their effect
when syllables collect
in palms open wide.
The pain from inside
begins to subside.
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Saturated emotion~
a mirage amid
arid thoughts.
Poetry develops
when wet meets dry.
Sweat and cry
onto the page;
let all your rage out
with fluid motion.
Inspiration rains
fall on desert plains,
envelop the land~
drenching the sand.
Creation by hands,
reflection unplanned:
a barrage of muse.
Soak those blues away;
leak to keep them at bay.
Gauge their effect
when syllables collect
in palms open wide.
The pain from inside
begins to subside.
a good poem you added here and impressive enough and like it much ..hope you write more and never stop such type of sweet poems... my poems are also here with the hope that you will comment few of them to be respected as a good friend ever I got...I am peace wisher poet...maybe your friend too