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Extended Metaphors They met
at the intersection-
a collision
of polar opposites,
a mixture
of volatile emotions
preparing to intermingle.
But rather than
neutralizing each other,
their bonds were broken:
a miscalculation
in chemical certainty
where they dissociated
instead of combined.
One was unwilling
to change his properties
in spite of the efforts
of the other
to excite attraction.
I love this,my only crit would be to change the word "excite" stanza four to "extract" I just think it would work better.Anyhows only an opinion still enjoyed it a lot. Cheers.