I'm a prisoner just trying to blend in
Behind bars to my own confining sin
Knowing I wasted my life by giving in
To the binding restraints of temptation
Thinking I'd have another shot at salvation
Only to find that I'd missed my probation.
You see, this life sentence I've served
All this self-inflicting pain I've deserved
However, it's all for a reason I've observed.
Our destiny is not something we create.
Nothing is coincidence; we can't escape fate.
I'll give my life to Him before it's too late.
Now it's time to stop giving in to sin
And start fighting these demons within
But I'm not alone; He will help me win.
Only when I realize that He holds the key
Will I ever have a chance to be set free
And finally discover all that I can be.
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I'm a prisoner just trying to blend in
behind bars to my own confining sin
knowing I wasted my life by giving in
to the binding chains of temptation
thinking I'd have another shot at salvation
only to find that I'd skipped my probation.
You see, this life sentence I've served
all this self-inflicted pain I've deserved.
However, it's all for a reason I've observed.
Our destiny is not something we create.
Nothing is coincidence; we can't escape fate.
I'll give my life to Him before it's too late.
Now it's time to stop giving in to sin
and start fighting these demons within.
But I'm not alone; He will help me win.
Only when I realize that He holds the key
will I ever have a chance to be set free
and finally discover all that I can be.
This poem is extremly good, the feelings are easily understood, and the writting is good... I love it, keep up the good writting and always know that God is there....