Strangled by sterile smells
while we entertain thoughts
of hope and walk in place
or along halls as empty
as the souls laying under
white sheets- those forced
to rest before they wanted to.
This is the place where we say
only hellos and goodbyes-
hellos to tiny bundles cradled
in arms but with huge promise,
goodbyes to wrinkled limbs
that abandoned promise long ago
before they stepped through
the sliding doors that have
since remained shut.
A place that can never be home,
but that is where all who enter
will soon be sent.
I really like this.
It's a perfect mix of angst and unknown.
critque mine! =]