You



You





The embers softly glow

as we side by side

lie basking in their warmth.





I heard your day

and u explored mine

exchanging experiences and thoughts.





You answered my problems

i challenged your ideas

we argued and laughed.





We lived our day

and talked of our dreams

we lay content.





I turned over or maybe you

was it my smile

echoing from your eyes





Did your hand touch mine

did i come closer

how did your lips take mine.





Perfect ending, warm and soft

in embers glowing

of the aftermath.





November 1999

Author's Notes/Comments: 

in an attempt to show how life should be between two lovers !!!

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Eric Cockrell's picture

the way love should be... very good poem. eric