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SUNRISE TANKA IN ANTICIPATION OF A MAJOR BLIZZARD
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a simple sunrise
naked branches shuddering
in December air
promises of snow blizzard
fill young 'uns hearts with wonder
You Can Feel
The starkness of
the branches
the air tells you
it comes and when
it comes it will
bring friends.
nice verse, glad to be of
nice verse, glad to be of inspiration. thank you.
The first stanza really is
The first stanza really is flawless. Methinks it's cool how you called the sunrise "simple" seeming to negate typical poetical conception which tries to bring as much beauty as possible with sparkling words; but "a simple sunrise" is just jazzy. The following lines are equally intimate and enticing.
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I greatly appreciate the
I greatly appreciate the praise. thank you
I certainly agree.
I certainly agree.
Starward
again, much thanks
again, much thanks