You did not cry when I held you
That night in deep desperation
As I wrapped my arms in sorrow
Around you for one more last time.
You did not sense the soul in pain
When you left fast to run to her
To make sweet love in your new bed
Warmed by your adulterous lies.
You did not see these grieving eyes
Staring softly out the window
While you stole away all the things
That once filled up our tiny home.
You did not heed the shattering
Of my heart crumbling like the glass
Of the crystal china I loved
Now so absent from dusty shelves.
You did not see me as I lay
Broken, tears soaking the empty
Quiet floor of the dark bedroom
That still held strong your lover's scent.
You did not see me lock the door
So softly, for the last moment
Fighting not to run back to you
And believe in true love again.
You, fool, did not see anything
Nor did you hear one single sound
Because you were never in love.
Unfortunately, I was.....
Amazing and deeply profound. I know that whomever this was that hurt you is realizing now, whawt truly special woman you really are and it is his loss and your wonderful words are everyone's gain!
Strong words I think betrayel is one of the worse things in life you wrote well here too..thankyou..shell trees..
Man...I felt your pain on this...this was deep.
AMY:
Beautifully written with so much hurt and pain in ones heart. He is not worth it if he cannot be your best and devoted friend and lover-for life itself is way too short not to be totally loved and cherished by another. Thank you for writing this poem Amy. It must have been very painful to write this poem. Please take care and have a very beautiful and safe weekend.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
2/25/2004
I saw.
Evocative.
Thoroughly depressing.
Beautiful work.
Richard.E.
This reminds me of how you love someone unconditionally, but you can't make them love you back. Unrequitted love is such a shame, but there's a reason for everything. This is probably just a stepping stone in someone's life before they meant the one for them and after being through this they can fully appreciate what they've found.