If I stood atop the highest mountain
And shouted my name to the wild winds
Or to the soaring eagle high overhead
Would anyone care to hear my little voice?
If I stood atop the highest mountain
And opened my soul to the land below
My thoughts, my sorrows, my deep loneliness
Would anyone take one moment to listen?
If I stood atop the highest mountain
And enlightened the wandering river
That I was once all that I claimed to be
Would the healing blue waters comfort me?
If I stood atop the highest mountain
And bowed deeply down to the ancient ground
To show my respect for Great Mother Earth
Would She know that I am her humble child?
If I stood atop the highest mountain
And wished on the brightest heavenly star
That some day love would surely come my way
Would I awaken from these endless dreams?
If I stood atop the highest mountain
And did not stop my tears from cascading
Like the rains upon the silent forests
Would you finally try to understand?
Amy:
Beautifully scripted with intense and very powerful visualization skills.A story well told by an expert story teller who definirely has the poetic "gift". Thank you for sharing and please take care.PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING MY LADY. Have a very beautiful and tranqual week.
Regards,
Dave Richardson-poetgent
8/25/2004
You carried your words, images, inspirations you gave to me to a whole new element with this poem. It's beautiful, inspiring, motivating, thought provoking. I love this piece very much and thank you for sharing it with not only me, but all those online blessed enough to read your wonderful poetry. God bless you.
Amy:
Beautifully written with so much love and beauty.Your descriptive skills are once again ming boggling-you have the reader thinking in every splendid twist and turn of your adventure.Your visionary skills in this sheer masterpiece are so so so intense-you have skils as a poetess Amy that few writers can ever possess!!!!Please never stop writing. Please take care and have a very beautiful and safe weekend.
Regards,
DJR
3/06/04