What hurts the most

What hurts the most

What hurts the most is not know if we could even be more then friends.

What hurt the most is the fear that the time is right,

 I will not find the right words to get your heart.

Then what hurt the most is when some other guy steal your heart

 and have to let you go.

What hurt the most is not know if everything

I am doing enough to make you feel special.

What hurt the most is fear that I will not be the one you end up loving.

What hurt the most is losing my chance without even be giving one.

What hurt the most is not know if I am good enough to get you.

What hurt the most is fear of losing you

and losing the feeling I got for you.

What hurts the most is knowing when will the right time

 and lose my chance.

What hurts the most is what I feel like it is like history repeating itself.

What hurts the most is the fear I got of losing you.

-Gene Conner

December 3, 2010

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onemanwar's picture

Very Well Done

The repetition in your poems give it a more bold feeling, and it gets the point across as the words add in more and more to your point, which is re-instated evey line. Very beautiful work, all of them.


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