Broken Heart

Broken Heart

Why do broken hearts  hurts so much?

Broken hearts are no fun.

Broken hearts can last as

long as hour to seems

like forever to get over.

That sometimes hurts more

than anything else.

Everyone can relate

somehow or other to this poem

Gene Conner

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teresa_r's picture

I can so relate to this I am going through the same thing right now and a part me just wants to die i really do. TERESA RIFE

MaryCannon Apodaca's picture

I noticed that your poem might have a word missing and a word you might want to change.

And yes.. I cane realte to the poem.
Marica

Broken Heart
Why do broken hearts ___ so much? ___ Missing word "HURT"
Broken hearts (is) no fun. Change (is) to are
Broken hearts can last as This line is hard to
long as hour to seems undersatnd
like forever to get over.
That sometimes hurts more
than anything else.
Everyone can relate
somehow or other to this poem