lately i have been
valuing my net worth
by how many lakes
i have swam naked in
someday i would like
to be a millionaire
deer pond today
though technically
as i slipped on the rock
and fell in, but i was on
my way for a short swim
it's raining bugs on the lake
taking torques of scotch and
eating the food of camping kings:
ramen noodles
it's my favorite time when
the sun is behind a mountain
all is quiet but
the whispering of birds and
the wheezing of mosquitoes
biking in was tough, but fun
i'm overheating with this sweater on
but it kind of keeps the bugs at bay
burnt orange clouds are
reflecting off the lake
i feel lucky it is not raining
i would be luckier if
you were here
This is really good! I like it. It doesn't quite have any shape or structure to it, but that is good. It's so free! Amazing poem