If You Only Knew…
Your hopes and dreams are shared….
If you only knew…
My support and understanding is endless, I genuinely care….
If you only knew…
How incredibly simple this could be….
If you only knew…
I accept you, your life and your need to be free….
If you only knew…
I’m really not perfect, not even close….
If you only knew…
I make mistakes, but growth comes from those….
If you only knew…
The rate of my heart beat when you’re near…
If you only knew…
The count of my tears when you’re not here….
If you only knew…
How much our love has continually grown….
If you only knew…
How sorry I am for my actions, so needlessly shown….
If you only knew…
You are the only man I think about….
If you only knew…
I love you with all my heart, there is no doubt…
If you only knew…
There is only one you…
Written by: Gereen April Salkowski©
Written for: Martin C.
Date written: June 10, 2010
This isn't bad. However, the
This isn't bad. However, the repeating of the line "If you only knew…" gets tiresome
A beautiful poem, indeed.
A beautiful poem, indeed. Filled with love and loss alike, and something that we all suffer through, and few can put into words, though it would appear you have managed it beautifully. Keep writing, this was, honest to goodness, the best part of my day. Thank you.
~.:.I Hope You Choke When You Swallow Your Pride.:.~