Attack of the dinosaur

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Pain

His tounge was like a razor,
His words like poison.
Slowly destroying my heart,
My warm, beating heart.
His was icy cold and dead,
Dead.

Her nails were claws,
Claws of the long-gone dinosaurs.
She was a meat-eater,
Hunting for fresh food.

Wheres the knife?
I took off my bracelets,
There was so many.
Hundreds, maybe thousands.
The red trickled down my arm,
Like rain from the sky,
Like tears from my eyes.
Now there was one thousand and one.

I watched myself.
I saw the cuts.
I put on the bracelets and a fake smile.
She got what she wanted,
She got blood

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lovelife123's picture

This is amazing! I really

This is amazing! I really liked it .:)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

thevisibilitycloak's picture

Fantastic, chilling. Just

Fantastic, chilling. Just read all of your poetry and while the others were good this poem had such vivid amazing imagery and chilled me to the bone. I could feel the menace and the poison inflicted on you. Absolutely amazing.

RedAsBlood's picture

Thanks so much! Im glad you

Thanks so much! Im glad you thought that.


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)