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DAGNABIT!
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Dagnabit! Missed the train
an hour to pass before
catching the next train.
Guess I need to stop at bar
and throw down a couple pints
Dagnabit!
an hour to pass before
the next train
I decide to throw down
a couple pints at the bar
They Changed Your Poem
Suckiness!
I agreed to the adjustment.
I agreed to the adjustment. I like having two different versions. I am finding as I go through all my old notebooks that I have multiple versions of different poems. It's good to work with other people to get different perspectives on verse. thank you for dropping by and commenting.
The first version is more
The first version is more intense and tells more of the situation. I am glad postpoems leaves editing to the poets.
Starward
thanks. I actually edit and
thanks. I actually edit and change my own poems all the time anyway. When I do poetry readings, I change words and lines. I think both have merit. Mallarmé once wrote that one never completes a poem, one merely abandons it. Maybe he was on to something.
I like your reference to
I like your reference to Mallarme. I will go look that up.
Starward
thanks, always glad to refer
thanks, always glad to refer people to great poetry