A Fool on a Hill as the Sun Sets

Isn't it amazing
how the thing
you so wanted
to be, you became;
and before you had even
learned to buckle
your armor,
you chose to betray
yourself, all of us,
and fell lower than
our eyes could see.

While I, who never
wanted this path,
this onerous duty,
who lacked the faith
have stood relentlessly
on these battlements
all these years,
bloodied, tattered,
but never falling.

And yet still I stand
sword and shield in hand,
and reflect that after
so many years,
I have less faith
in the cause
than when I began,
and my only hope
is to continue
to hold the high ground
and continue
to stand.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

:(

:(


Much Love

Ashley

Faded_shades's picture

;-)

I knew this one would make you frown, but I could have walked away at any time, and did once ;-) ain't free will & destiny a bitch! ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

now for the poem "ain;t free

now for the poem "ain;t free will and destiny a bitch" GO... ;)

 

and I gthink i forwn only beacue I fele like I know enough about you to put some more deepth behind the poem, I have an idea of what I think it is about, so many angles and aspects of it hurt in sense, yet over all I can only smile because in writing it out you are sharing your beauty and wonderful, human soul with the world :)


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

You always get me, even when I don't ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

that's what poetical soul mates do ;)

 


Much Love

Ashley

amywilkie's picture

:)

"Before you had even learned to buckle your armor..." - great line.

Faded_shades's picture

;-)

Thank you!

darkpool's picture

Who is right, he who betrayed

Who is right, he who betrayed the faith and followed his heart, oryou who stood your ground, never questioning why you remained true for so long? Now it's too late, you must stay at your post and not waver.

 

Great write, thoughtful.

Faded_shades's picture

Indeed

Your words are wise. Once some lines drawn, you must stand or face the consequences. While I abhor that choice, I sometimes wonder which requires the greater fortitude or foolishness.

Imprinted-soul's picture

WOW!! This is incredible

WOW!! This is incredible work..
I loved it.

Faded_shades's picture

Thank you! Your comment means

Thank you! Your comment means a lot to me! Thanks again!

ashes_theartofburning's picture

A bleeding heart...

is always a good write, but one in the process of a repair...

OH!

What words shall grace your paper!

Lovely. ^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Faded_shades's picture

Stunned

By your compliment! indebted!

darkpool's picture

Keep on holding the high

Keep on holding the high ground, you're doing the right thing?

Faded_shades's picture

Thanks Darkpool

It's almost always easier to keep up the fight from high ground. If only the setting sun wasn't making the targets so hard to identify.

SSmoothie's picture

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Faded_shades's picture

Thank you!

That means so much to me!