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Good thing I still have that anti-venom
You stand there,
beautiful to the eye
in the sunlight,
but coiled,
a serpent,
cold blooded,
prepared to strike,
a venom of words
waiting to infect
my mind, my will,
turn them into a oozing
puddle of puss.
Maybe you can't help
how pathetic you still are
but thank God
I'm not the monster
you thought I would be.
oh wow! not gonna lie the
oh wow! not gonna lie the poem was not getting much of my attention but that last bit, after you call her pathetic on, just wow I loved it
keep posting :)
Much Love
Ashley
Sneak attack!
If you can't leave them smiling, at least leave them with SOME emotion on their face at the end! Not exactly a happy poem, but I am happy you connected with it in the end. Deeply appreciated!
it was the sneakiness that
it was the sneakiness that impacted me so, it got under my skin and then BANG lit fire!
Much Love
Ashley
Ugh!
"Maybe you can't help
how pathetic you still are
but thank God
I'm not the monster
you thought I would be"
I can relate to this right now, and again I loved this!
Wonderful work. <3
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Thank you!
Honored that you connected and by your kind words!
Nice work !
Nice work !
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you!
Thank You!
Anti-Venom
I keep a vial on hand, just in case. Great words from the pen master ~~A~~
Indebted!
Your kind and wise words always brighten my day, focus my mind and move my pen! Thank you, Lady A!
Hm...
Hm...
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo