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Act your shoe size they say
Act your shoe size they say
but is that really teh best thing to do
If i did then i would forever be eith and a half
I would have no cares
and run up every set of stairs
I would run and play and run away
Act your shoe size they say
But maybe i'll listen some other day
Because i don't want to run and play all day
or even run away
interesting topic...catchy title too! but...
i think you're trying too hard to rhyme things here. i'm not saying you shouldn't rhyme, or that you have too, but it seems as if the rhythm of your poem is getting thrown off. it doesn't flow too well anymore. i'd say after the first three lines, you start to stumble.
i like this one...it's cute
hey jen its chris...thanks for the compliments on my writing :-) i just write things down that happen that day all the things i have wrote were an incident that happend that day or just the way i was feeling at that point in time...and i was reading ur stuff and i like it...it gots sum feeling to it...and seems like u were kinda through a heartbreak or sumtin similar to that...but yeah...you got sum good stuff :-)