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pleasurable radiology
This is a cancerous situation,
requiring the absolution
that only severance of
contact can bring.
Inebriated fantasies replay,
and through this silent film of covetousness,
a decision is reached.
To want is basic.
To fixate on opportunities passed
is harmful
and may lead to third degree sin.
Some deep thoughts expressed here, it leaves the reader wondering: what 3rd degree sin they might entertain.
Collectively, I think that the words you chose worked well to the poem's benefit and complemented the theme.
Kewl stuff.