My poems suck

My poems suck
I'm not that good
Now I can sculpt and chop some wood!

I want to write metaphorically
With heart and grace
Like music with feeling
And lots of bass.

Comparatives
Narrative shorts
Good rhymes
And verb supports.

My poems suck!

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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

My first poems were quite

My first poems were quite horrid but I kept writing and my skill slowly began to raise. There is no great poet who didn't write a few bad ones.

Keep writing!


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

allets's picture

Sucky Is Valid

This poem pokes pins into the pillows of poets who have spent far too many hours reaing books of verse and prosody to "nail it" or any version of good writing. It takes years, or if you are a genius, a few good reads and off you go. It's a lot of posturing, tons of ego, and one hell of a lot of fun, actually - write on (I enjoyed this one - there was so much of me in there that you crushed so well and well, we've earned). Nice mind behind this one - write on and on!~~ yours in writing, Stella L. Crews (aka Rosethorne/ Lady A/ allets~not the one on the internet, Mubdia Onyamaichi) andor  simply ~~A~~